2006/11/26
如何写好一个既长而且漂亮的句子?
1、写清句子主干:Subject predicate object.
2、公式:--a--主语--b--谓语--c--宾语--d--
3、法则:添枝加叶,在abcd处添加不同的#成分。
4、具体操作
a #介词短语:during the arduous two years
#从句:while the discussion was going on
#过去分词短语:approved by Immigration & Checkpoints Authority
#现在分词短语:pertaining to the registration
#副词开头:definitely and concretely
b #名词短语:the battleground where...
#现在/过去分词短语
#形容词短语
#介词短语
#组合结构
c #副词结构
#介词短语
#分词短语
d #名词短语
#从句
#形容词结构
#连词+第二套动作
所以一句话的你可以通过上百种形式说,而且都是长句子。
我们举一个最简单的例子:
Neilson Baker discovered a fact.
我们把它添枝加叶为:
Through an arduous and a long-time probing, Neilson Baker, the professor in astronomy of UC Berkeley, recently discovered by detecting the incidence of solar flares an astounding fact that appearance of sunspots is irregular, the reality regarded as a periodic celestial phenomena for many decades.